Beauty In The Ugly

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Beauty In The Ugly

Post by Hibari san on Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:56 am

Beauty In The Ugly

Thou looks shant matter
Thou eyes tell it all
Who thou is, what thou wants
If thee falls for beauty thou ist ugly
If thou falls for personality and who though truly is then ye is beautiful and full of passion worth thy true love and protection.
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Post by skyrocks93 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:25 pm

what style is this?
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Post by Hibari san on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:28 pm

skyrocks93 wrote:what style is this?

The style is shakespear but the info is mine
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Post by skyrocks93 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:29 pm

kool ^=^ I thought it was shakespear
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Post by Hibari san on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:30 pm

skyrocks93 wrote:kool ^=^ I thought it was shakespear

yahs im a romantic poet makes up for me bein single alot but im glad im waiting cause my next love i truely wish to be my true love
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Post by skyrocks93 on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:34 pm

good luck finding a mate ^=^
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Post by Hibari san on Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:35 pm

skyrocks93 wrote:good luck finding a mate ^=^

hahah thanks but its a hard quest to locate a heart like mine
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Re: Beauty In The Ugly

Post by Raeleon Tiberious on Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:13 am

I was originally going to comment that it is well written and well put together (and it is)
Then I read how it was described, style wise. It is not Shakespearean; the language yes, but not the style.

Shakespeare wrote in classical sonnet form:
With exactly ten syllables per line,
With a rhyme pattern: ABAB CDCD EFEF GG
Being made up of 3 four line parts and a rhyming couplet.

I loved the poem, keep up the great work!
I just wanted to also throw in a bit of educational information too.

Please know that I am not trying to be mean, I just wanted to help...cause maybe now he can write a true sonnet, he is skilled enough and his talent should not go to waste. :I you may start bashing me now...
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